落星胡兆祥 发表于 2023-8-23 02:35:10

落星的《七夕梦佳期》

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游走的画笔 发表于 2023-8-24 13:25:48

两首里。“相逢心寂寂，忍顾步迟迟”这两句有点古韵，意境。少现代口语化入。点赞

蚂蚁 发表于 2023-8-23 07:46:20

七夕是美好的愿望

深海一束光 发表于 2023-8-23 09:17:04

一首好诗，美好愿望/赞

爱星星 发表于 2023-8-23 09:31:14

祝七夕快乐

1527029559 发表于 2023-8-23 13:08:43

写的挺好的

洋葱和土豆 发表于 2023-8-23 13:42:17

写的挺好的

烟雨庐山 发表于 2023-8-23 16:11:13

看不懂，但是也要点赞

陈龙阳 发表于 2023-8-23 20:21:44

相约七夕，让美好愿望都实现

守株待兔 发表于 2023-8-23 20:21:44

中国情人节

甜言蜜于 发表于 2023-8-24 10:23:27

写的挺好的
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