表达思念的诗，蚂蚁力作
<p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 21pt;"><b style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman";">恋之风景</span></b></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 21pt;"><b style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman";"></span></b></p><span><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 21pt;"><font size="3"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;">绵绵细雨一线牵，屋檐底下滴玉帘。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p></p></span></font></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 21pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><font size="3">堂前飞燕惆怅脸，思君不见又一年。</font></span><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 21pt;"><p></p></p></span> <p>越是力作也没人看</p><p>看了也没人回．．．．．．</p> 呵呵,好诗,.描述"雨"的词语就有.<span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'mso-hansi-font-family:'mso-bidi-font-size:10.5pt;">绵绵细雨一线牵,滴玉帘二句;并且是从点\线\面三个方面进行了景色的描述,与"两个黄鹂鸣翠柳,一行白鹭上青天,窗含西岭千秋雪,门泊东吴万里船"是一样描述的.."<span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'mso-hansi-font-family:'mso-bidi-font-size:10.5pt;">绵绵细雨一线牵"从线上来说,"屋檐底下滴玉帘"从点上来说,"<span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'mso-hansi-font-family:'mso-bidi-font-size:10.5pt;"><font size="3">堂前飞燕惆怅脸"说的又是面.对友人的思念又来自平常生活所见的雨水与飞燕,全诗四句,全压韵脚"ian",全通"怜"字,可见诗人是多么怜惜友人,而见到的燕子又是"惆怅脸",像是"感时花溅泪,恨别鸟惊心"一样,景由情生,情溶景中,连不会思想的动植物也为你感慨万分,悲痛欲绝.最后一句更是让人肺腑皆断,惆怅不已...对友人真诚的怜惜与思念跃之纸上.</font></span></span></span>
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